Title:  So Pretty
Author:  banlu
Date written:  October 25, 2006
Rating:  R
Category:  V, A
Spoilers:  None.
Keywords:  CD.. or not CD.  That is the question.
Summary:  He's so pretty.  117 words for mims and belle.
Archive:  Ephemeral and Gossamer.  Anyone else, please ask.

Comments:  Okay, I came up with this idea of writing a 117 
word stalkerfic for mimic117 and bellefluer in honor of 
their combo birthday, November 7th.  Well, it got deep and 
dark, but I knew they wouldn't want me to kill anyone on 
their day, so I came up with an alternate ending just for 
them.  LOL

Disclaimer:  No matter how hard I wish, they aren't mine, 
aren't mine, aren't mine...

Thanks:  To aka Jake for the beta, since I couldn't let my 
wonderful beta mims see this before her birthday!

Dedication:  To mims and belle.  Funny, y'all don't look a 
day older than you did on your last 30th birthday!

Author's note:  The birthday ending is down below.

Feedback:  banlutoo@yahoo.com

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So Pretty
by banlu


So pretty.

Square jaw.

Almond eyes.

Thick, juicy, beautifully luscious lips.

Big nose, but not ugly.

No no no, nothing ugly about him.

The way his bangs curl around his forehead.  Perfect.

He's so pretty in my pictures.  Black/white, color, doesn't 
matter.

But they don't do him justice.

Don't show how soft and smooth and warm his skin is.

Don't show how he grunts as the pretty shiny knife carves 
letters into that soft skin.

Don't show how the blood runs down that smooth skin in ever 
growing streams, accompanied by ever growing screams.

Don't show the thrilling, exciting, arousing look of fear 
in his eyes as I kill him.

Don't show how ugly I still am.


end


Author's note:  The birthday ending.

Replace the last line with: 

"But before I can, she finds us."